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stefanpetre26 Newbie

stefanpetre26

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Hi there, Mohammad! I am also new to Fiverr and facing the same issue as you do: not getting my first order.

Maybe someone can take a look at my gig and tell me wheter you like it or not and what I can improve to make it look better and get more orders.

My main gig is: https://www.fiverr.com/share/zAlZxR (Proofreading & Editing)
Secondary gig: https://www.fiverr.com/share/lrbaYj (Logo design)
My Fiverr profile: https://www.fiverr.com/stefanpetre26 (@stefanpetre26)

Thank you for your time 🙂

Best wishes,
Stefan P.

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nkprostudio Newbie

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Hi. I’ve had a look at your profile and gigs, and at first glance everything looks good. It’s great that you’ve taken a couple of skills tests, your gig photos look appealing, and your response rate is very good. However…

  1. you are offering services in one of the most competitive fields on Fiverr. There are thousands of other sellers offering similar services to you, although that on its own doesn’t mean you won’t be offered jobs. Which is why I think number 2 is an issue…

  2. Your English is letting you down. Bearing in mind I’ve spent less than one minute looking at your your profile, yet I’ve noticed some of your gig titles don’t make any sense. The gig title is your shop window, your chance to shout about your service, the way people search for services on Fiverr. No matter how amazing your skills, if your gig titles make no sense then you’re not going to get an order. Two examples from your profile:

  • I will provide neck joint fast. What? I don’t understand! It’s only when I look at your gig photo that I can see two images of shirts, one with the neck collar neatly fastened and the other with the neck open. Your gig title could instead be * I will alter photos of shirts so they appear neatly fastened at the collar

  • I will product photo editing for e commerce. What? I don’t understand! Your gig photo shows two similar images side by side, but one has a display support structure removed. Therefore your gig title could be something like * I will remove unwanted display structures from your photos ready for e-commerce

My examples can be improved further, but at least they make sense.

Also, your personal description can be improved. You write: Hi!

I specialize in photo retouching\ Photoshop editing such as removing the background, color correction, Product retouch and others Graphics design work.

I always try to delivery the Best Design and complete the job quickly.

Please contact me and I will be pleased to work with you!

All work takes place within 24hours

How about: Hi. I specialize in Photoshop editing services including photo retouching, removing backgrounds, color correction, and other graphic design tasks. Please see my gigs for individual services. I have XX years of experience and assure you of a highly professional service. I always aim to deliver the very best results in the quickest time to ensure your satisfaction. All work is completed within 24 hours. Please contact me to discuss your job. I will be pleased to work with you.

You’ve just had a free proofreading service! Good luck my friend.

Hey @mohammadiliyas9 you are a lucky person, that your profile check by @english_voice

you must implement his tips to improve your profile,

I Hope, soon you will get some order…

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mohammadiliyas9 Newbie

mohammadiliyas9

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Hi. I’ve had a look at your profile and gigs, and at first glance everything looks good. It’s great that you’ve taken a couple of skills tests, your gig photos look appealing, and your response rate is very good. However…

  1. you are offering services in one of the most competitive fields on Fiverr. There are thousands of other sellers offering similar services to you, although that on its own doesn’t mean you won’t be offered jobs. Which is why I think number 2 is an issue…

  2. Your English is letting you down. Bearing in mind I’ve spent less than one minute looking at your your profile, yet I’ve noticed some of your gig titles don’t make any sense. The gig title is your shop window, your chance to shout about your service, the way people search for services on Fiverr. No matter how amazing your skills, if your gig titles make no sense then you’re not going to get an order. Two examples from your profile:

  • I will provide neck joint fast. What? I don’t understand! It’s only when I look at your gig photo that I can see two images of shirts, one with the neck collar neatly fastened and the other with the neck open. Your gig title could instead be * I will alter photos of shirts so they appear neatly fastened at the collar

  • I will product photo editing for e commerce. What? I don’t understand! Your gig photo shows two similar images side by side, but one has a display support structure removed. Therefore your gig title could be something like * I will remove unwanted display structures from your photos ready for e-commerce

My examples can be improved further, but at least they make sense.

Also, your personal description can be improved. You write: Hi!

I specialize in photo retouching\ Photoshop editing such as removing the background, color correction, Product retouch and others Graphics design work.

I always try to delivery the Best Design and complete the job quickly.

Please contact me and I will be pleased to work with you!

All work takes place within 24hours

How about: Hi. I specialize in Photoshop editing services including photo retouching, removing backgrounds, color correction, and other graphic design tasks. Please see my gigs for individual services. I have XX years of experience and assure you of a highly professional service. I always aim to deliver the very best results in the quickest time to ensure your satisfaction. All work is completed within 24 hours. Please contact me to discuss your job. I will be pleased to work with you.

You’ve just had a free proofreading service! Good luck my friend.

I want to say @english_voice Thanks because you checked my profile. I have been able to correct many of my mistakes and now I am confident.

I hope, soon I will get some orders…

If you have some time, please check my profile

https://www.fiverr.com/mohammadiliyas9

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visualstudios

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I want to say @english_voice Thanks because you checked my profile. I have been able to correct many of my mistakes and now I am confident.

I hope, soon I will get some orders…

If you have some time, please check my profile

https://www.fiverr.com/mohammadiliyas9

It’s looking alright, just one thing - never offer unlimited revisions. It’s a bad idea.

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