How i can get my first order..need suggestions

[masoon_iftikhar]

thank you @masoon_iftikhar

Welcome @zeefinancialist

[zeefinancialist]

suggestion for my gig
https://www.fiverr.com/zeefinancialist/do-perfect-complete-and-comprehensive-business-plan

[goldsmydy]

If you can make the gig images landscape, it will be good and the last gig image text is hard to read. With all that fix, I think your gig is ready to go.

[zeefinancialist]

If you can make the gig images landscape, it will be good and the last gig image text is hard to read. With all that fix, I think your gig is ready to go.

Thank u for your suggestion

@goldsmydy

[frank_d]

I would never purchase a “business plan” for $5. It wouldn’t be a business plan, it would just be a templated presentation. No financial analysis? Technically speaking that’s not a business plan.

So instead of offering close to nothing for $5 revise your business plan and start offering just one package for the full price.

If someone means business and see the value you bring to the table they wouldn’t bat an eye hiring you for more.

No one would buy a $5 “business plan” it makes you look cheap and of lower value.

[zeefinancialist]

@frank_d thank you so much… For your concern

On 1/29/2020 at 7:01 PM, frank_d said:

I would never purchase a “business plan” for $5. It wouldn’t be a business plan, it would just be a templated presentation. No financial analysis? Technically speaking that’s not a business plan.

So instead of offering close to nothing for $5 revise your business plan and start offering just one package for the full price.

If someone means business and see the value you bring to the table they wouldn’t bat an eye hiring you for more.

No one would buy a $5 “business plan” it makes you look cheap and of lower value.

@frank_d but the problem is nobody invests in a new seller… everyone needs ratings good reviews. I got an order 4 days of $15 which is far cheaper than my hard work. But there is no option initially when I created high price gigs I didn’t get orders.

[zeefinancialist]

hi check out my gigs and give me suggestions
https://www.fiverr.com/zeefinancialist/do-perfect-complete-and-comprehensive-business-plan

[zeefinancialist]

can someone suggest me i any changes or improvements required in my gig so that i can get more orders.
https://www.fiverr.com/zeefinancialist/do-perfect-complete-and-comprehensive-business-plan

[humanissocial]

In your gig you just say the topics titles of the document. These tells a buyer nothing about the value you provide. Anyone can make a document that has xyz topics. What makes yours skilled? This needs to be clear. There’s nothing here to indicate the quality or value of your work.

If you’re writing business plans, you especially need to demonstrate that you understand how to build a case for value.

Also, the point of a business plan is to help a client reach a goal. You haven’t oriented your gig around what you actually help a client accomplish, in terms of business objectives.

[zeefinancialist]

In your gig you just say the topics titles of the document. These tells a buyer nothing about the value you provide. Anyone can make a document that has xyz topics. What makes yours skilled? This needs to be clear. There’s nothing here to indicate the quality or value of your work.

If you’re writing business plans, you especially need to demonstrate that you understand how to build a case for value.

Also, the point of a business plan is to help a client reach a goal. You haven’t oriented your gig around what you actually help a client accomplish, in terms of business objectives.

thank u so much @humanissocial…

[mujtaba_vector]

Hi ,
I hope you are doing well ,what happens to you gig it is good but i like to advise you to add some more pictures and plz made an attachment of video it will help you
thanks

[imagination7413]

Unlimited revisions are never a good idea.
Fiverr doesn’t permit identical gigs. (TOS)
Fiverr allows three images per gig, maybe add more?
Your gig descriptions need to clearly differentiate what perks are part of which package, rather than listing them all out lumped together.
There are several English errors in this gig, your other gigs, and your profile.

[saifulislam_396]

maybe alright now…
zeefina

[zeefinancialist]

need suggestion for gig
https://www.fiverr.com/zeefinancialist/do-perfect-complete-and-comprehensive-business-plan

[newplus_design]

I think it is good gig and I saw your profile and your profile got orders 😃

[zeefinancialist]

I think it is good gig and I saw your profile and your profile got orders 😃

alhmdolilah Thank u @newplus_design

[frank_d]

So since we spoke last another Fiverr seller who does exactly what you do only for a lot more, ordered from you?

[zeefinancialist]

So since we spoke last another Fiverr seller who does exactly what you do only for a lot more, ordered from you?

i cant understand can you please elaborate sir

[mariashtelle1]

So you are creating “perfect complete business plans”, right?

All business plans should include risk assessments, market research and profitability evaluation.
So why don’t you write business plan for yourself? And your business plan will be for your business and for your gig and it will answer your question if business plans worth it on fiverr or not :woman_shrugging:

[morshed87]

I think it is good gig.what the problem?

[zeefinancialist]

So you are creating “perfect complete business plans”, right?

All business plans should include risk assessments, market research and profitability evaluation.

So why don’t you write business plan for yourself? And your business plan will be for your business and for your gig and it will answer your question if business plans worth it on fiverr or not :woman_shrugging:

Maam what you are saying is absolutely correct but covering these areas costs more… and my gig is not that much costly as i am new to fiver… Thanks for suggestion. Good Day @mariashtelle1

[macgyverart]

same 😍

[mariashtelle1]

Maam what you are saying is absolutely correct but covering these areas costs more… and my gig is not that much costly as i am new to fiver… Thanks for suggestion. Good Day @mariashtelle1

but covering these areas costs more

It cost you zero to create business plan for yourself

[macaracha777]

@frank_d but the problem is nobody invests in a new seller… everyone needs ratings good reviews. I got an order 4 days of $15 which is far cheaper than my hard work. But there is no option initially when I created high price gigs I didn’t get orders.

There is a great old saying:

The bitterness of quality stays long after the sweetness of low price is gone…

I do business plans for few years already and will never charge anything less than $700, as this is quality, with marketing and SWAT analysis, with financial projections and balance sheets. For me takes at least 5-6 days to produce a business plan, which is suitable for investors and at the end it is startups selling pitch. Poor business plan = No business

Always remember the old saying…