mahmoudosama94 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 Hello,What are the steps that I should do to write an attractive proposal?Because I always send great offers and no one respond to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mzie88 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 Can you kindly share one or 2 of your offers that you have sent, i will be able to assist you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest anjylina Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 I would love to hear tips by @mzie88 . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mahmoudosama94 Posted January 7, 2017 Author Share Posted January 7, 2017 Can you kindly share one or 2 of your offers that you have sent, i will be able to assist you.I offer him to order my starter package then he will get the intermediate package and if he ordered the intermediate one he will get the professional package.the second offer was if he ordered any of my logo design package he will get a free business card design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mzie88 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 I offer him to order my starter package then he will get the intermediate package and if he ordered the intermediate one he will get the professional package.the second offer was if he ordered any of my logo design package he will get a free business card design.@mahmoudosama94 sometimes it’s not about what you are offering them ,but how offer it to them, Your pitch to them. You should give them every reason why they should order from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest silkroute Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 @mahmoudosama94 sometimes it’s not about what you are offering them ,but how offer it to them, Your pitch to them. You should give them every reason why they should order from you.This has peaked my interest. Let’s say someone wants [X] and I am able to do [X]. Can you show us an example of what would be a good, short and crisp sales pitch for the Fiverr buyer section?My ‘pitch’ never goes beyond giving them a timeline and cost estimate, and this has worked out well. But I’d like to see if there is scope for me to be more creative 🙂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djgodknows Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 @mahmoudosama94 sometimes it’s not about what you are offering them ,but how offer it to them, Your pitch to them. You should give them every reason why they should order from you.You should give them every reason why they should order from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest capitalquality Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 @mahmoudosama94 sometimes it’s not about what you are offering them ,but how offer it to them, Your pitch to them. You should give them every reason why they should order from you.You should give them every reason why they should order from you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest capitalquality Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 I offer him to order my starter package then he will get the intermediate package and if he ordered the intermediate one he will get the professional package.the second offer was if he ordered any of my logo design package he will get a free business card design.It doesn’t sound to me as if you’re sending an offer that directly relates to what is being asked for, you’re just pointing the buyer to your gigs.In buyer requests, you need to customize your response to the request & you need to remember the buyer wants to see everything he needs to know in your offer because they’ll get a lot of offers and they won’t want to click through to see everyone’s gigs.In summary do include:costtimeframesomething that shows your understanding of their requestideas you have on how you’ll deliver, if relevantwhy they should accept your offer over everyone else’s - what skills, experience etc. you haveonly include things relevant to the request and your ability to deliver thatDon’t:simply list your gigssimply self-promote without it being relevant to the offertry to upsell in your offerdon’t offer freebie extras unless they’re relevant to the buyer request Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gina_riley2 Posted January 7, 2017 Share Posted January 7, 2017 Here is a link to a post done by a seller that directly speaks to an effective proposal. This may answer some of your questions.http://forum.fiverr.com/t/buyer-requests-feature-basics-for-sellers-what-and-where-is-br?source_topic_id=97952As a buyer, everything she wrote is point on! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wale_sulta Posted May 8, 2021 Share Posted May 8, 2021 i want a well generalize offer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
genuineguidance Posted May 8, 2021 Share Posted May 8, 2021 i want a well generalize offerNo, you do NOT want a “general” or form letter type of offer that you just copy/paste to Buyer’s Requests. That is a good way to have your “offer” tossed into the trash. As mentioned above and in many other threads that give advice about writing offers - the key is to write your offer as if you actually READ what the buyer needs. Not some generalized form letter about how great you are, your experience and to “order now”.As a side note, this is a 4 year old thread you are responding to - maybe do a search of the forum on how to write an effective Buyer’s Request offer. Tons of threads and advice already given.GG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess0012 Posted July 3, 2021 Share Posted July 3, 2021 I would like to get tips on how to get order Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enunciator Posted July 3, 2021 Share Posted July 3, 2021 Let this thread 😴 already... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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