Share Your Ads,Links to 15,000,000 Facebook use new gig

[microengr]

Hi Expert ,



I have started new gig few hours back. Please check and let me know if anything needs to be updated or corrected.



https://www.fiverr.com/microengr/share-your-ads-links-to-15-000-000-facebook-users?funnel=2014113011095904218002740



All suggestions will be welcomed.



Thanks -

[wegotshoutouts]

instead of saying “i would love to guarantee” i would say “I guarantee” in your description because what you have now sounds questionable. Other then that, Very good job!

[alw1nl]

‘15,000,000 Facebook links’ ?



You must be or either a hacker or a spammer.

[tylerullery]

A few problems for one, you need to answer the 3 W’s in your gig description which can be found here http://forum.fiverr.com/discussion/49599/the-3-w039s-to-include-in-your-description Second you made everything bold which makes nothing in your description stand out. If you want to make everything bold find but then highlight key parts of your description. Only highlight maybe 5 words in your entire description though. The highlights will draw the buyers eye to key “selling words” and make them more likely to buy. If you highlight to much that nothing is retained and can become an eye sore.

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[microengr]

am not a spammer,my post/links/ads can reach up to 15m+ facebook users,

[microengr]

@wegotshoutouts @tylerullery THANKS FOR UR MESSAGES