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[shalini_sharm]

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[ghoshradhe]

Good.

[mandyzines]

Well, to me, you kind of look like you just got arrested in your photo, or at least are not very approachable. AI voices do not connect with people--potential clients. And there you are just one person but here you use "we" and "us" so it's hard to know who's behind the account.