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Guest brenna_n

I would check your description for grammatical errors. There are also some better ways to phrase some sentences so that they flow better.

 

For example, instead of "I am presently to help you", write "I provide". Instead of saying "Hey) welcome to my gig, my name is kdavid", say "Hello! My name is Kdavid."

 

Same for the bottom text.

Change this-

When you buy my gig, you can reach me whenever you need. We can discuss for the best result. Customer satisfaction important thing for me. 

I am online24/7. I can not wait to work with you. 

 

To this-

 

Please reach out to me whenever it is necessary, so that we can discuss the matter. Your satisfaction is very important to me, and I can not wait to work with you.

 

 

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