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For only $45, hamnashahiddph will book editing and proofreading. | I will copy edit and proofread your novel or nonfiction book to ensure it is error-free and publish-ready.As a highly experienced copy editor with BSc | On Fiverr

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I will copy edit and proofread your novel or nonfiction book to ensure it is error-free and publish-ready.

As a highly experienced copy editor with BSc in medical science. - this feels incomplete

I edit manually correcting grammar, spelling, punctuation, and syntax with an added focus on consistency and other technical details.

I will correct:

• Grammar
• Spelling
• Punctuation
• Syntax
• Inconsistencies
• Tense inaccuracies
• American & British English

Please see my FAQs for further details and reach out for a custom quote.

NOTE: Upload your manuscript as a Microsoft Word document or pdf file.

I look forward to hearing from you - order now or send me a message.

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I have experience in typing jobs.
I have experience using Microsoft Excel and Word.
I have been working as a data entry operator for many years.
I have a team with 4 professional people for managing data entry tasks.
we believe that high quality and customer satisfaction is the most important thing for us.

I am a full-time professional Editor and I love what I do!
I welcome most genres of fiction and nonfiction books. I look forward to working with you!

Feel free to drop a message and discuss your needs and objectives.

[hamnashahiddph]

I will copy edit and proofread your novel or nonfiction book to ensure it is error-free and publish-ready.

As a highly experienced copy editor with BSc in medical science. - this feels incomplete

I edit manually correcting grammar, spelling, punctuation, and syntax with an added focus on consistency and other technical details.

I will correct:

• Grammar
• Spelling
• Punctuation
• Syntax
• Inconsistencies
• Tense inaccuracies
• American & British English

Please see my FAQs for further details and reach out for a custom quote.

NOTE: Upload your manuscript as a Microsoft Word document or pdf file.

I look forward to hearing from you - order now or send me a message.

From the above text remove extra spacing. From the bellow change the wording, you have too many “I have”. Try to create and upload better images.

I have experience in typing jobs.

I have experience using Microsoft Excel and Word.

I have been working as a data entry operator for many years.

I have a team with 4 professional people for managing data entry tasks.

we believe that high quality and customer satisfaction is the most important thing for us.

I am a full-time professional Editor and I love what I do!

I welcome most genres of fiction and nonfiction books. I look forward to working with you!

Feel free to drop a message and discuss your needs and objectives.

Thank you for your time .

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