mohammadgraphic Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 I have mad my first fiverr gig, all fiverr community including byers and sellers see my gig and feed back for improvement.I will be very thankful to all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mae_creativity Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 What’s your gig’s link? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
photo_surgeon Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 very nice …Thumbs up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mohammadgraphic Posted November 4, 2018 Author Share Posted November 4, 2018 What’s your gig’s link?https://www.fiverr.com/s2/5aa0c458a1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mohammadgraphic Posted November 4, 2018 Author Share Posted November 4, 2018 very nice …Thumbs upThank you so much - great one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mae_creativity Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 Respected Sir/Mam [my note: Sounds a little spammy. No need for this. delete sentence in my opinion.]Thanks for viewing my gig. If you are looking for a responsive graphic designer, your are at right place.[my note: Better to get to the point as fast as humanly possible because you have a split second before the reader decides to either move on or continue reading. I would change to: Need quality graphic designing in a hurry? You’ve come to the right place.]My SERVICESBackground RemovalGet a Transparent Background [my note: change to Replacing original background with a transparent one]Clipping Path [my note: I have no idea if this is correct or not cuz I don’t know enough about photoshop]Image Masking, Hair masking, Manual masking [my note: change to Image, hair and manual masking]Product & portrait retouch [my note: Change to retouching]Removing Unwanted objects, remove blemishes and shadowImage Resizing [my note: change to Removing unwanted objects, blemishes and shadows]Add drop shadow, natural shadow, reflection shadow [my note: change to Adding drop, natural and reflection shadows]Add effects [my note: change to Adding effects]Enhance colour [my note: change to Color enhancement]Jewellery retouch [my note: Change to- Jewelry retouching]Out Door image editing [my note: change to Editing of outdoor images]and much more [my note: i suggest either listing the other things, or writing: If you need anything else, please send me a message.]Why you have to choose me? [my note: “have” is not the right word here. change to: Why should you choose me?]I have 3 years experience in Adobe Photoshop and user satisfaction is my first priority. I will provide you quality services.[my note: Numbers 1-10 in English should be written as a word–I have three years experience . . . / change to: I have three years experience working with Adobe Photoshop. Client satisfaction and providing high quality work are my highest priorities.]Feel free to contact me 24/7. I will respond to you as soon as possible.In this gig I will provide you unlimited revisions. [my note: change to: Orders include unlimited revisions.](end of gig desc)I gotta get back to work, so that just a quick edit of your gig description.I just wanna say one last thing and this is the MOST important thing in my opinion: take down the profile pic you have up now, and upload a REAL photo of you. ! ! ! ! ! ! !Best of luck, May 🐧 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swopnildesign Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 https://www.fiverr.com/s2/5aa0c458a1That’s is so awesome continue your work and also your success in a few month’s so please wait and good communication for buyer and good work provides all time…Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
optimistjishan Posted November 4, 2018 Share Posted November 4, 2018 Nice gig. Do more & carry on. Best of luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mohammadgraphic Posted November 5, 2018 Author Share Posted November 5, 2018 Respected Sir/Mam [my note: Sounds a little spammy. No need for this. delete sentence in my opinion.]Thanks for viewing my gig. If you are looking for a responsive graphic designer, your are at right place.[my note: Better to get to the point as fast as humanly possible because you have a split second before the reader decides to either move on or continue reading. I would change to: Need quality graphic designing in a hurry? You’ve come to the right place.]My SERVICESBackground RemovalGet a Transparent Background [my note: change to Replacing original background with a transparent one]Clipping Path [my note: I have no idea if this is correct or not cuz I don’t know enough about photoshop]Image Masking, Hair masking, Manual masking [my note: change to Image, hair and manual masking]Product & portrait retouch [my note: Change to retouching]Removing Unwanted objects, remove blemishes and shadowImage Resizing [my note: change to Removing unwanted objects, blemishes and shadows]Add drop shadow, natural shadow, reflection shadow [my note: change to Adding drop, natural and reflection shadows]Add effects [my note: change to Adding effects]Enhance colour [my note: change to Color enhancement]Jewellery retouch [my note: Change to- Jewelry retouching]Out Door image editing [my note: change to Editing of outdoor images]and much more [my note: i suggest either listing the other things, or writing: If you need anything else, please send me a message.]Why you have to choose me? [my note: “have” is not the right word here. change to: Why should you choose me?]I have 3 years experience in Adobe Photoshop and user satisfaction is my first priority. I will provide you quality services.[my note: Numbers 1-10 in English should be written as a word–I have three years experience . . . / change to: I have three years experience working with Adobe Photoshop. Client satisfaction and providing high quality work are my highest priorities.]Feel free to contact me 24/7. I will respond to you as soon as possible.In this gig I will provide you unlimited revisions. [my note: change to: Orders include unlimited revisions.](end of gig desc)I gotta get back to work, so that just a quick edit of your gig description.I just wanna say one last thing and this is the MOST important thing in my opinion: take down the profile pic you have up now, and upload a REAL photo of you. ! ! ! ! ! ! !Best of luck, May 🐧Thank you so much mae_crativity. God bless you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kumuduprasad Posted November 5, 2018 Share Posted November 5, 2018 Respected Sir/Mam [my note: Sounds a little spammy. No need for this. delete sentence in my opinion.]Thanks for viewing my gig. If you are looking for a responsive graphic designer, your are at right place.[my note: Better to get to the point as fast as humanly possible because you have a split second before the reader decides to either move on or continue reading. I would change to: Need quality graphic designing in a hurry? You’ve come to the right place.]My SERVICESBackground RemovalGet a Transparent Background [my note: change to Replacing original background with a transparent one]Clipping Path [my note: I have no idea if this is correct or not cuz I don’t know enough about photoshop]Image Masking, Hair masking, Manual masking [my note: change to Image, hair and manual masking]Product & portrait retouch [my note: Change to retouching]Removing Unwanted objects, remove blemishes and shadowImage Resizing [my note: change to Removing unwanted objects, blemishes and shadows]Add drop shadow, natural shadow, reflection shadow [my note: change to Adding drop, natural and reflection shadows]Add effects [my note: change to Adding effects]Enhance colour [my note: change to Color enhancement]Jewellery retouch [my note: Change to- Jewelry retouching]Out Door image editing [my note: change to Editing of outdoor images]and much more [my note: i suggest either listing the other things, or writing: If you need anything else, please send me a message.]Why you have to choose me? [my note: “have” is not the right word here. change to: Why should you choose me?]I have 3 years experience in Adobe Photoshop and user satisfaction is my first priority. I will provide you quality services.[my note: Numbers 1-10 in English should be written as a word–I have three years experience . . . / change to: I have three years experience working with Adobe Photoshop. Client satisfaction and providing high quality work are my highest priorities.]Feel free to contact me 24/7. I will respond to you as soon as possible.In this gig I will provide you unlimited revisions. [my note: change to: Orders include unlimited revisions.](end of gig desc)I gotta get back to work, so that just a quick edit of your gig description.I just wanna say one last thing and this is the MOST important thing in my opinion: take down the profile pic you have up now, and upload a REAL photo of you. ! ! ! ! ! ! !Best of luck, May 🐧This is really helpful.Thank you so much mae_creativity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mae_creativity Posted November 6, 2018 Share Posted November 6, 2018 Also this might interest you -@kumuduprasad, @mohammadgraphic Tips for non- native English speakers… Hiya [i speak and teach several languages, so here are some tips for you about writing in English on Fiverr.] DIFFERENT LANGUAGES - DIFFERENT CULTURES: For example - in Spain, when you walk into a store, the clerk says: ‘Que quieres?’ This is the normal thing to say and expect to hear. But in English, ‘What do you want?’ sounds very rude. If a seller in England asked me that, I wouldn’t answer, and just leave the store. In Spain, I would … Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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