designerustaad Posted July 21, 2017 Share Posted July 21, 2017 someone please review my gigs and mention my mistakes to me so i can improve them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ahmedghumro Posted July 21, 2017 Share Posted July 21, 2017 Nice work and Awesome GIG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
designerustaad Posted July 21, 2017 Author Share Posted July 21, 2017 Nice work and Awesome GIG.Then why i can’t get orders although i sent 65 requests i only get 3 orders only and all of them i delivered with 5 stars and positive reviews as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blaisefaint Posted July 21, 2017 Share Posted July 21, 2017 Dear Shah Zaib:I advise you to capitalize the spelling of your name in your profile text.I took a quick look at your profile:Your profile image: I recommend a color photo of your smiling face. Others may recommend you use a logo or a caricature to protect your privacy. No reputable person associated with Fiverr recommends that you ever lie about your location or attempt to deceive Buyers with misleading information. (I’m not saying you have, I’m just including this information for the benefit of anyone else who might read this post.)Your one-line statement that appears on the profile page, directly below your user name: No comment.Your profile text – note the edits:I have THOUSANDS of hours of digital imaging editing experience. No problem with your photos could ever be too tragic! Please send me your pictures and let me work… MY MAGIC! -Shah ZaibEven though I tweaked this, I suggest you go back to the drawing board or hire a copy writer. If you want to write it yourself, read “Ogilvy on Advertising” or some other book on copy writing.You need to work on your English skills, as communication with your Buyers may be a big issue for you.Awkward: “I will create every type of business card on your demand"Awkward: I will create your imagination in a food logo”I suggest you build gigs around the type of software you use. For example, Adobe Illustrator or After Effects or Photoshop all have strong demand on Fiverr.All your gigs should have video, 3 images, 2 pdfs (for more samples and your business policies), and so on…Make a video of yourself talking to the camera, because this approach garners IMMEDIATE RESULTS. Include additional samples in the video!Good luck,Blaise[details=Click Here for TOP SECRET Tips and TricksNever Contact a Seller on Fiverr to Ask for FREE STUFF!]Be sure to read the Fiverr Terms of Service and to make use of Tools like the Fiverr Blog, Fiverr Academy, Fiverrcast, and Fiverr Support.Engage your common sense. Not every suggestion here will work for you. You are responsible for your results, so you should test everything and adjust for your own best results.I suggest you check out Fiverrcast episode 08: Working Through Language Barriers.As a general rule, when I have time to participate in the Fiverr Forum and I notice a request like yours in the “Improve My Gig” section, I am willing and able to look at a Seller’s Profile and one gig one time.I can give you a better level of assistance if you first work your way through the checklist below. That way, I won’t waste your one turn by advising you to follow items on the checklist.Please study this thread: https://forum.fiverr.com/t/the-big-day-i-finally-ask-blaisefaint-to-critique-my-gig/104448 to better appreciate what I’m talking about here. It should take you a minimum of 4 weeks to make your way through all the material.If you haven’t already read Strengths Finder 2.0 and taken that assessment, I suggest you do so, because it should give you the language to express your strengths and help you to brainstorm some gigs for which you are especially well qualified. Check out the writing of Chris Guillebeau and Tim Ferriss. By Josh Kaufman, I recommend The First 20 Hours: How to Learn Anything… Fast! and The Personal MBA. Also, you could read Influence by Robert Cialdini and Get Anyone to Do Anything by David J. Lieberman.Here’s a thread discussing a specific example of a Buyer Request for which I created a gig and then asked for help improving that gig via the forum.https://www.fiverr.com/academy/quality/cancellations-and-how-to-avoid-themPlease copy and paste the links below to read these articles:http://forum.fiverr.com/t/improve-my-gig-checklist/84987 Improve My Gig Checklisthttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/39-tips-tricks-for-super-sellers/108171/2 39 Tips and Tricks for Super Sellershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/do-this-not-that-part-3-of-the-seller-tip-trilogy/104017 Seller Tip Trilogyhttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/im-new-and-need-sales-3-top-tips-tricks-to-generating-sales-from-a-top-rated-seller/97341 3 Top Tips and Trickshttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/using-the-live-portfolio-to-generate-sales-even-as-a-non-visual-gig-play-pause-video-tutorial/116035 Make Optimum Use of Your Live Portfolio, (especially for non-graphics gigs)https://forum.fiverr.com/t/how-to-up-your-game-on-fiverr-and-elsewhere/124514 Up Your Gamehttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/play-pause-video-tutorial-achieve-unlimited-upsells-with-fiverr-anywhere/88568 Fiverr Anywhere Video Tutorialhttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/buyer-requests-feature-basics-for-sellers-what-and-where-is-br/98001Buyer Requests 1http://forum.fiverr.com/t/buyer-requests-how-to-get-the-gig/98098 Buyer Requests 2http://forum.fiverr.com/t/tips-for-sellers-who-are-not-native-english-speakers/73054?source_topic_id=99257Tips for Non-Native English Speakershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/sell-me-this-pen-a-sellers-instructionals-from-a-techies-pov/90578?source_topic_id=98098Sellers Instructionals from a Techies POVhttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/7000-impression-and-just-three-sales-what-do-you-think-is-wrong/108787/10 Make a Product that Naturally Develops Repeat Customershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/amazing-idea-that-helps-with-the-seo-of-your-gig/98334 SEO Ideahttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/352-54-sales-in-our-first-month/99135 54 Sales in Our First Monthhttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/7-tips-for-upselling/99558 7 Tips for Upsellinghttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/some-info-and-opinion-on-chargebacks/99786 Chargebackshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/how-i-use-social-media-to-market-my-fiverr-gigs-archived/50259?source_topic_id=101997 Social Media Gig Marketinghttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/keeping-a-flow-of-orders-to-avoid-both-late-deliveries-and-dry-spells/80572 Managing Buyer Expectationshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/possible-hints-on-gig-tweakings-and-maintaining-improving-rank-or-avoiding-loss-of-rank/103015 Gig Tweakshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/q-stolen-content-what-should-i-know-about-digital-copyright/101930 Digital Copyrighthttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/making-gig-images-compatible-through-out-fiverr/101014 Gig Imageshttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/request-questions-for-fiverrcast-re-launch/103551 Fiverrcast Questionshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/why-does-fiverr-charge-20-commission-on-tips/101144 Fiverr’s Cuthttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/fiverr-should-be-called-thirtyrr-or-fortyrr/106786/8 Cogent Discussion of Buyers, Sellers, and Sellershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/warning-signs-of-a-potentially-troublesome-buyer/96669 Warning Signs of a Potentially Troublesome Buyerhttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/warning-signs-of-a-potentially-troublesome-seller/106329 Warning Signs of a Potentially Troublesome Sellerhttp://support.fiverr.com/hc/en-us/articles/205167778-What-URLs-can-I-use-in-my-profile-or-Gig-description What URLs Can I Use?https://www.fiverr.com/terms_of_service Fiverr Terms of Servicehttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/think-before-you-post-a-forum-topic/104192 How to Make Millions on Fiverr[/details] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uk1000 Posted July 21, 2017 Share Posted July 21, 2017 I agree with blaisefaint that the wording of the gigs needs to be improved.There is also still a discrepancy between the wording used in the title of gig(s) and that shown below (eg. Title says “I will remove background 15 images in 24 hours” but below it says "i will remove 20 images background in 10 hours without losing image quality " and below that it says “10 images”. So is it 15, 20 or 10 images?In the background removal gig, in the example images, the mesh part of the chair arm to camera right has been removed erroneously. Also, in the that gig, in the 3rd image, where it is meant to be showing an example of background removal, it shows an image of a mountain bike alone and a mountain bike “on” a road. However the mountain bike image hasn’t been removed from the road image - it’s been overlayed on it (overlaid on an image of an empty road - which is a bit misleading considering the the image is supposed to be an example background removal). The shadows (or lack of them)/lighting on the “bike on road” image also indicate it is not really there (on that road). I think it would be better to show another example image of a background actually removed in place of the bike images. The same thing applies to the “before” and “after” images of the jewellery - if would be better (and avoid misleading buyers) to show actual example images of background removal instead of simulated background removal examples. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
designerustaad Posted July 22, 2017 Author Share Posted July 22, 2017 Dear Shah Zaib:I advise you to capitalize the spelling of your name in your profile text.I took a quick look at your profile:Your profile image: I recommend a color photo of your smiling face. Others may recommend you use a logo or a caricature to protect your privacy. No reputable person associated with Fiverr recommends that you ever lie about your location or attempt to deceive Buyers with misleading information. (I’m not saying you have, I’m just including this information for the benefit of anyone else who might read this post.)Your one-line statement that appears on the profile page, directly below your user name: No comment.Your profile text – note the edits:I have THOUSANDS of hours of digital imaging editing experience. No problem with your photos could ever be too tragic! Please send me your pictures and let me work… MY MAGIC! -Shah ZaibEven though I tweaked this, I suggest you go back to the drawing board or hire a copy writer. If you want to write it yourself, read “Ogilvy on Advertising” or some other book on copy writing.You need to work on your English skills, as communication with your Buyers may be a big issue for you.Awkward: “I will create every type of business card on your demand"Awkward: I will create your imagination in a food logo”I suggest you build gigs around the type of software you use. For example, Adobe Illustrator or After Effects or Photoshop all have strong demand on Fiverr.All your gigs should have video, 3 images, 2 pdfs (for more samples and your business policies), and so on…Make a video of yourself talking to the camera, because this approach garners IMMEDIATE RESULTS. Include additional samples in the video!Good luck,Blaise[details=Click Here for TOP SECRET Tips and TricksNever Contact a Seller on Fiverr to Ask for FREE STUFF!]Be sure to read the Fiverr Terms of Service and to make use of Tools like the Fiverr Blog, Fiverr Academy, Fiverrcast, and Fiverr Support.Engage your common sense. Not every suggestion here will work for you. You are responsible for your results, so you should test everything and adjust for your own best results.I suggest you check out Fiverrcast episode 08: Working Through Language Barriers.As a general rule, when I have time to participate in the Fiverr Forum and I notice a request like yours in the “Improve My Gig” section, I am willing and able to look at a Seller’s Profile and one gig one time.I can give you a better level of assistance if you first work your way through the checklist below. That way, I won’t waste your one turn by advising you to follow items on the checklist.Please study this thread: https://forum.fiverr.com/t/the-big-day-i-finally-ask-blaisefaint-to-critique-my-gig/104448 to better appreciate what I’m talking about here. It should take you a minimum of 4 weeks to make your way through all the material.If you haven’t already read Strengths Finder 2.0 and taken that assessment, I suggest you do so, because it should give you the language to express your strengths and help you to brainstorm some gigs for which you are especially well qualified. Check out the writing of Chris Guillebeau and Tim Ferriss. By Josh Kaufman, I recommend The First 20 Hours: How to Learn Anything… Fast! and The Personal MBA. Also, you could read Influence by Robert Cialdini and Get Anyone to Do Anything by David J. Lieberman.Here’s a thread discussing a specific example of a Buyer Request for which I created a gig and then asked for help improving that gig via the forum.https://www.fiverr.com/academy/quality/cancellations-and-how-to-avoid-themPlease copy and paste the links below to read these articles:http://forum.fiverr.com/t/improve-my-gig-checklist/84987 Improve My Gig Checklisthttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/39-tips-tricks-for-super-sellers/108171/2 39 Tips and Tricks for Super Sellershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/do-this-not-that-part-3-of-the-seller-tip-trilogy/104017 Seller Tip Trilogyhttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/im-new-and-need-sales-3-top-tips-tricks-to-generating-sales-from-a-top-rated-seller/97341 3 Top Tips and Trickshttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/using-the-live-portfolio-to-generate-sales-even-as-a-non-visual-gig-play-pause-video-tutorial/116035 Make Optimum Use of Your Live Portfolio, (especially for non-graphics gigs)https://forum.fiverr.com/t/how-to-up-your-game-on-fiverr-and-elsewhere/124514 Up Your Gamehttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/play-pause-video-tutorial-achieve-unlimited-upsells-with-fiverr-anywhere/88568 Fiverr Anywhere Video Tutorialhttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/buyer-requests-feature-basics-for-sellers-what-and-where-is-br/98001Buyer Requests 1http://forum.fiverr.com/t/buyer-requests-how-to-get-the-gig/98098 Buyer Requests 2http://forum.fiverr.com/t/tips-for-sellers-who-are-not-native-english-speakers/73054?source_topic_id=99257Tips for Non-Native English Speakershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/sell-me-this-pen-a-sellers-instructionals-from-a-techies-pov/90578?source_topic_id=98098Sellers Instructionals from a Techies POVhttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/7000-impression-and-just-three-sales-what-do-you-think-is-wrong/108787/10 Make a Product that Naturally Develops Repeat Customershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/amazing-idea-that-helps-with-the-seo-of-your-gig/98334 SEO Ideahttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/352-54-sales-in-our-first-month/99135 54 Sales in Our First Monthhttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/7-tips-for-upselling/99558 7 Tips for Upsellinghttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/some-info-and-opinion-on-chargebacks/99786 Chargebackshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/how-i-use-social-media-to-market-my-fiverr-gigs-archived/50259?source_topic_id=101997 Social Media Gig Marketinghttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/keeping-a-flow-of-orders-to-avoid-both-late-deliveries-and-dry-spells/80572 Managing Buyer Expectationshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/possible-hints-on-gig-tweakings-and-maintaining-improving-rank-or-avoiding-loss-of-rank/103015 Gig Tweakshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/q-stolen-content-what-should-i-know-about-digital-copyright/101930 Digital Copyrighthttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/making-gig-images-compatible-through-out-fiverr/101014 Gig Imageshttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/request-questions-for-fiverrcast-re-launch/103551 Fiverrcast Questionshttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/why-does-fiverr-charge-20-commission-on-tips/101144 Fiverr’s Cuthttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/fiverr-should-be-called-thirtyrr-or-fortyrr/106786/8 Cogent Discussion of Buyers, Sellers, and Sellershttp://forum.fiverr.com/t/warning-signs-of-a-potentially-troublesome-buyer/96669 Warning Signs of a Potentially Troublesome Buyerhttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/warning-signs-of-a-potentially-troublesome-seller/106329 Warning Signs of a Potentially Troublesome Sellerhttp://support.fiverr.com/hc/en-us/articles/205167778-What-URLs-can-I-use-in-my-profile-or-Gig-description What URLs Can I Use?https://www.fiverr.com/terms_of_service Fiverr Terms of Servicehttps://forum.fiverr.com/t/think-before-you-post-a-forum-topic/104192 How to Make Millions on Fiverr[/details]thanks for reviewing my gigs and give me suggestions.it will help me a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
designerustaad Posted July 22, 2017 Author Share Posted July 22, 2017 I agree with blaisefaint that the wording of the gigs needs to be improved.There is also still a discrepancy between the wording used in the title of gig(s) and that shown below (eg. Title says “I will remove background 15 images in 24 hours” but below it says "i will remove 20 images background in 10 hours without losing image quality " and below that it says “10 images”. So is it 15, 20 or 10 images?In the background removal gig, in the example images, the mesh part of the chair arm to camera right has been removed erroneously. Also, in the that gig, in the 3rd image, where it is meant to be showing an example of background removal, it shows an image of a mountain bike alone and a mountain bike “on” a road. However the mountain bike image hasn’t been removed from the road image - it’s been overlayed on it (overlaid on an image of an empty road - which is a bit misleading considering the the image is supposed to be an example background removal). The shadows (or lack of them)/lighting on the “bike on road” image also indicate it is not really there (on that road). I think it would be better to show another example image of a background actually removed in place of the bike images. The same thing applies to the “before” and “after” images of the jewellery - if would be better (and avoid misleading buyers) to show actual example images of background removal instead of simulated background removal examples.uk1000 thanks for deeply analyze my gigs you mentioned me all of my weakness my mistakes. I thank you very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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