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It says “Thankyou for chosing My gig”. Maybe change to “Thank you for choosing my gig”.

It says “I belive customer sastification is the key of sucess”.
Maybe change to “I believe customer satisfaction is the key to success.”.

I’d probably reword the “PLEASE GIVE ME A MESSAGE WITH FULL REQUIREMENT BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER” line.

Maybe change the last “thankyou.” to “thank you” or “Thank you” if it’s a new sentence.

It says “You have a wounderfull day”. Maybe change the “wounderfull” to “wonderful”.

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It says “Thankyou for chosing My gig”. Maybe change to “Thank you for choosing my gig”.

It says “I belive customer sastification is the key of sucess”.

Maybe change to “I believe customer satisfaction is the key to success.”.

I’d probably reword the “PLEASE GIVE ME A MESSAGE WITH FULL REQUIREMENT BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER” line.

Maybe change the last “thankyou.” to “thank you” or “Thank you” if it’s a new sentence.

It says “You have a wounderfull day”. Maybe change the “wounderfull” to “wonderful”.

wounderfull

thankyou so much @uk1000

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