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uk1000 Posted November 25, 2019 Share Posted November 25, 2019 It says “Thankyou for chosing My gig”. Maybe change to “Thank you for choosing my gig”.It says “I belive customer sastification is the key of sucess”.Maybe change to “I believe customer satisfaction is the key to success.”.I’d probably reword the “PLEASE GIVE ME A MESSAGE WITH FULL REQUIREMENT BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER” line.Maybe change the last “thankyou.” to “thank you” or “Thank you” if it’s a new sentence.It says “You have a wounderfull day”. Maybe change the “wounderfull” to “wonderful”. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dataoncology Posted November 25, 2019 Author Share Posted November 25, 2019 It says “Thankyou for chosing My gig”. Maybe change to “Thank you for choosing my gig”.It says “I belive customer sastification is the key of sucess”.Maybe change to “I believe customer satisfaction is the key to success.”.I’d probably reword the “PLEASE GIVE ME A MESSAGE WITH FULL REQUIREMENT BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER” line.Maybe change the last “thankyou.” to “thank you” or “Thank you” if it’s a new sentence.It says “You have a wounderfull day”. Maybe change the “wounderfull” to “wonderful”.wounderfullthankyou so much @uk1000 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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