Look at my gig and give some suggestions

[aslamroonjho]

Hi every one,
This is my first gig, kindly look at my gig and give some suggestions to improve.
https://www.fiverr.com/s2/4aa284b569?utm_source=com.google.android.apps.docs_Mobile

[jeremyc1992]

Your gig description needs some proofreading. There are some grammatical mistakes and repetitive words.

[aslamroonjho]

Your gig description needs some proofreading. There are some grammatical mistakes and repetitive words.

Thanks a lot dear I will improve these mistakes soon