andiwandirana Posted August 24, 2019 Share Posted August 24, 2019 Hi,My name is Andy I’am here since feb 2019and im have completed 2 orderlast weeki just want to ask you guys about your opinion about my gigshere is the link : https://www.fiverr.com/share/DZL2QPlease be honest about your gigs opinion ill take any positive sugesstion from y’allRegards,Andi wandi rana 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bestintheword Posted August 24, 2019 Share Posted August 24, 2019 PLEASE READ THIS CAREFULLY BEFORE ORDERSThis is your opening statementI think it should bePLEASE READ THIS CAREFULLY BEFORE ORDERING 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andiwandirana Posted August 24, 2019 Author Share Posted August 24, 2019 ow thank you very much i didn’t realize it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatwordchick Posted August 24, 2019 Share Posted August 24, 2019 Hey Andy! My name is Delany - I’m a copywriter. While there aren’t any particularly bad grammar errors or anything, the tone of your ad comes off a little casual. I can see your images being used for CEO portraits on startup websites, author/convention speaker bios, etc - don’t sell yourself short! You should use a tone that reflects this kind of high-value placement and emphasize the value of having these unique versions of oneself. I can help if you’d like. 🙂 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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