rayan_shaw Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Hi there! im a new seller on fiverr ,joined a day ago. I created my first gig and now i need to know if my gig is correct or are there any flaws which are going to affect my gig.Thank you fellas…have a nice dayhttps://www.fiverr.com/rayan_shaw/create-impressive-bussiness-name-brand-name-and-tagline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neromare Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Well, hello there.Your main photo.Fonts are jagged.Way too jagged.Reminds me of the 90’s and Windows 95.Glorious times it was, no doubt.You probably didn’t make these buttons yourself. You just snatched them buttons with a resolution 50 pixels and pasted them.Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dinislambds Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Don’t use long title please… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jovanibrown Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Your Gig needs considerable work.What does ‘Aware of Trade-Mark Laws’ mean? Are you aware that ‘trademark’ is one word? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selfors Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Looks good to me. Neromare has a point about the jagged font. But still, not a deal killer. I bet you do okay once you get some ratings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neromare Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Looks good to me. Neromare has a point about the jagged font. But still, not a deal killer. I bet you do okay once you get some ratings.I don’t know. Looks shady. Like those internet based ads that pop-up everywhere and offer us great solutions to enlarge our…you know. This was before the time of AdBlock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uxreview Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Is someone teaching you guys to copy content from other people?the Brand Name itself carries more weight than you might think - and can mark the difference between a brand that gains traction and one that falls flatFor gods sake, you’re selling branding yet you can’t write 1200chars on your own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selfors Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Is someone teaching you guys to copy content from other people?the Brand Name itself carries more weight than you might think - and can mark the difference between a brand that gains traction and one that falls flatFor gods sake, you’re selling branding yet you can’t write 1200chars on your own.the Brand Name itself carries more weight than you might think - and can mark the difference between a brand that gains traction and one that falls flatThe 27-word line is repeated 5 times on the internet verbatim. While we cannot be sure that he didn’t write the line himself each of those times, if had as done so, it would have been beneficial to reword it here. In fact, if he did copy it, as he probably did, he really should have reworded it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uxreview Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 the Brand Name itself carries more weight than you might think - and can mark the difference between a brand that gains traction and one that falls flatThe 27-word line is repeated 5 times on the internet verbatim. While we cannot be sure that he didn’t write the line himself each of those times, if had as done so, it would have been beneficial to reword it here. In fact, if he did copy it, as he probably did, he really should have reworded it.While we cannot be sure that he didn’t write the line himself each of those timesI can because I know the source. I even read it when it was published 🙂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selfors Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 While we cannot be sure that he didn’t write the line himself each of those timesI can because I know the source. I even read it when it was published 🙂Dude, if I’m going to steal a line, it’s going to be like Winston Churchill or something. It’s not even that cool a sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uxreview Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 I wouldn’t care as much if it was yet another SEO gig(you know which ones I mean), but if you’re selling branding and you can’t even write your own description then what are you going to offer to your clients. You can really screw up someone’s brand identity. Although I don’t think a serious business would buy that gig anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rayan_shaw Posted December 9, 2017 Author Share Posted December 9, 2017 Thanks everyone, but what changes do i need to make according to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
selfors Posted December 9, 2017 Share Posted December 9, 2017 Thanks everyone, but what changes do i need to make according to you.He is suggesting your gig description ought to be original content, not something cribbed from the internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rayan_shaw Posted December 9, 2017 Author Share Posted December 9, 2017 I wouldn’t care as much if it was yet another SEO gig(you know which ones I mean), but if you’re selling branding and you can’t even write your own description then what are you going to offer to your clients. You can really screw up someone’s brand identity. Although I don’t think a serious business would buy that gig anyway.Thank you for you honest review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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