Your Thoughts On My Profile

[worldtraveller2]

Just like to ask for feedback. Some assistance, with what you all think of my profile, from the ratings. photos and gigs etc.
I have been very successful here on Fiver.com
love the site, but like to get things more busy and get better at this. So I ask of all of you, some suggestions please of how I can improve my profile
what are your first impressions of what you see and read so far. all the help the better thanks

[madein5rr]

Just replace a first sentence - “Good evening”

[chrissym001]

Hi,

You have a very good profile. Have you attempted to promote it on social media sites? LinkedIn would be the perfect place for you to do promotions. Also, have you done research on the right keywords to use for each of your gigs? I would also reword your tagline. It sounds a bit awkward to me, but that’s just my opinion.

Kind regards,

Christine

[worldtraveller2]

thanks