Is my gig ok to start providing services on Fiverr?

[kashif719]

Is my gig ok to start providing services on Fiverr?
I want some experienced reviews for my Gig. 
What should I do to get my first order?
Thanks

Here is the link:
https://www.fiverr.com/share/kAZ3oo

 

[marketer_merina]

You gig image is not very eye catching. You used "do you want" several time, it should be something different. However, your description is good  

[kashif719]

53 minutes ago, marketer_merina said:

You gig image is not very eye catching. You used "do you want" several time, it should be something different. However, your description is good  

Thanks marketer_merina, I have done some changes, I would like to request you to check that again, thanks.

Here is the link:
https://www.fiverr.com/share/kAZ3oo