This is my new gig,how can inprove?

[idrisali20]

well come to my Gig <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

I am an expert at text intro creation. I have professional training in video intro create. all audiences are real & organic 100% guaranteed. if you need this kind of intro video then tell me.

“Talk before ordering then order.”

Why choose my services?

• High-quality videos.
• 24 Hours delivery
• Full service
• 100% Money Back Guaranteed
• Commercial Use

How does this gig work?

• Go to gallery
• Choose which you like
• Order gig and say me the number of intros which you want
• You can choose the color, text, music, and logo.

Thank you for trusting in my services!

gig link:https://www.fiverr.com/share/KddBpV

[code_chief]

Nice one, hope get order soon

[uk1000]

It says “well come to my Gig” - welcome is one word.
It says “all audiences are real & organic 100% guaranteed.” - but the gig is for the creation of a video/videos so that seems irrelevant for this gig (it seems like that line has been copied from another of your gigs).