Newbie Voice Over Feedback on my Gig Appreciated

[ronniejack]

Hey everyone ! Hope everyone if doing well this evening.

Looking for any feedback on my first voice over gig posting.

If you could take a bit of time and listen to my gig I would appreciate it. It is my first posting.

Here’s the link : https://www.fiverr.com/share/7Yl3V4

Thanks ! Ronnie Jack