Suggest improvements for my fiver gig?

[aaron222]

What’s lacking from my gig? I have over 70 views but only 2 purchases, are there any improvements you guys can suggest? Where am i going wrong? I’m new here. Only constructive help please. Thank you.

[mariokluser]

It’s quite a good conversion rate. Especially since the fact that you don’t seem to be native in the language you offer your service in. It’s “… only 2 sales,…” and not “… only 2 buys,…”

[aaron222]

It’s ‘especially since’ and not ‘especially seen’ ,or it’s ‘especially seeing’, it’s hard to tell what you meant. Your profile is riddled in mistakes too, you might want to change that. I am a native, it was an error because I’m typing in a forum and it doesn’t really matter lol. You can’t correct someone and then make a mistake yourself. As I said, only constructive help please. Move along.

[mariokluser]

Thanks for the correction. Your reply does sound more native indeed.
I type on my smartphone b.t.w. an sometimes accept blindly what the auto correction has to offer.
However, if you have have 70 views and 2 sales, your conversion rate is above average, so don’t you worry about that.
Now I move along.