Dear Experts Need your help

[Guest tanjimulislam]

I’ve created this gig more than two weaks ago, but I’m not getting any sale. Can anybody help me what do do?
Thank you 🙂

[blaisefaint]

Dear Tanjimul:

I took a quick look at your profile and one of your gigs.

Here is a checklist to help you improve your gigs.

Your profile description has too much jargon – I can’t really make heads or tails of it.

100% Client Satisficatsfication guaranteed.
I will create responsive protfolio website

What is “satisficatsfication”? What’s a “protfolio”? As a layperson, I don’t understand your jargon and buzzwords!

I suggest rewording everything for the Buyer who needs your help. Is that a layperson who doesn’t understand jargon, or is that an expert in the field who knows all those buzzwords? Tune your message accordingly.

You need to polish your English spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I suggest you hire a copy writer.

Good luck,
Blaise