ninjavfx Posted April 27, 2016 Share Posted April 27, 2016 This post is for native speakers. Can you tell me your impressions about my grammar on my video:https://www.fiverr.com/ninjavfx/make-this-explainer-video-sell-promote-explain?funnel=3e0d871c-0731-4205-826f-cbf2a3eff53bIs it…correct? Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anna Posted April 27, 2016 Share Posted April 27, 2016 Your thread was moved to “My Fiverr Gigs” here you should be able to get some help ;). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
publishingmaven Posted April 27, 2016 Share Posted April 27, 2016 The grammar in the video sounds fine. Unless it’s just an audio issue, it sounds like you are missing an “a” at the start of the missing link sentence. Either that, or it could be rephrased to “Professional explainer videos are…” You also have a few articles (a/an/the) missing in your gig description. It’s not a huge deal, but it’s unusual for native English speakers to drop articles. That’s a nice video, BTW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninjavfx Posted June 12, 2016 Author Share Posted June 12, 2016 Thank you very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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