What do you think is missing from the animation of this logo? What do you think about the idea?

[posall]

In my opinion, the animation of this logo is not bad, but I will be happy to listen to the criticism of professionals.😊

[imagination7413]

Missing? Character, personality, almost all of the twelve principles of animation, cohesion...

If this is practice, then fair, you've got to start somewhere. I don't know if I'd consider it worth Fiverr's minimum price. I suspect you're going to struggle to complete if you plan to sell at this level.

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