Video upload issues

[palongia]

My video content for the portfolio keeps getting rejected. What am I doing wrong?

https://vimeo.com/206499758

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State in the video that your service is offered exclusively on Fiverr.
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Remove any website, service, or product mentioned that is not sold through Fiverr
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Edit: added feedback from fiverr

[lisabaarns]

Max length is one min for gig demos.

[palongia]

Max length is one min for gig demos.

Thanks! So would it be possible to create multiple sets of intros, and list them under different gigs?

[leahemme]

Yes, it’s too long, you should find a way maybe to incorporate the intro options into your gig requirements. Have it link to this video showing the customer the options they can choose from.

In your gig video, it should just be that you’re offering to create video intros or openers, 30 options to choose from, 24 hour delivery, great customer service, etc!

also, just as a first impression, the pacing should be faster. you only have a couple seconds to grab someone’s attention, so it needs to move along quicker with those first few text screens.

a few tweaks and you’ll be good! : )

[palongia]

Yes, it’s too long, you should find a way maybe to incorporate the intro options into your gig requirements. Have it link to this video showing the customer the options they can choose from.

In your gig video, it should just be that you’re offering to create video intros or openers, 30 options to choose from, 24 hour delivery, great customer service, etc!

also, just as a first impression, the pacing should be faster. you only have a couple seconds to grab someone’s attention, so it needs to move along quicker with those first few text screens.

a few tweaks and you’ll be good! : )

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback!