What do you feel about my gig form buyer perspective?

[akashchgupta]

I’m new to Fiverr and I listed my first listing. I want your feedback about it [link “fragglesrocked” (removed)]

Is it perfect or I should make any changes.



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[kashintro]

check my video Intro gig:
https://www.fiverr.com/s2/665a9519f8