Is anything wrong with my gigs?

[Guest kilometer11111]

Hello fiverrians! i am a professional solo ads specialist, with perfect skill at it and i joined fiver for about 4months ago, although i just created my gigs not quite long. So i want you guys to please help me take a look at them if there is wrong or anything that needs changes in other for me to make my 1st sales and many more thereafter. I will be glad if this forum can assist me because i was told that fiverr forum is full of much assistance and diversity of favor.

Thanks!

[david388]

Hi @kilometer11111, I took a peek at your gigs, and in my humble opinion I think they need a fairbit of work, from the photos to the descriptions.



Also, there are some issues with grammar and syntax that will make it difficult to convince a Buyer that you are actually a professional at this particular skill. Feel free to shoot me a message to my inbox if you want to discuss further!

[dbgoodeats]

Hey 🙂 !

When you first start, you’re worried I understand.

1. Try to keep yourself online for your customer (quick reply, quick order)
   
2. Over deliver if you can 🙂
   
3. Buyer’s request section can help get you orders also
   
4. Most important, be positive 🙂 ! you’ll get new orders soon fiverr literally has a market for anything you can imagine!
   
   
   
   This is a place, where buyers will find you 🙂 !!
   
   
   
   Wish you good luck!
   
   
   
   https://www.fiverr.com/dbgoodeats

[fastcopywriter]

1. Your gig images are too busy (they have too many words)

    

    

2. Your gig description is all in bold and you need to separate those paragraphs

    

    

3. Do you really speak English, Spanish, German, French, Dutch, Italian? From the point of view of a buyer, it seems unlikely. I’m bilingual, I know people who are trilingual, but if you’re from the USA, it’s a hard sell to convince people you speak 5 languages

    

    

4. On your profile you write “try us today,” if you are a company, why are you using a personal picture of you and a baby? You should have a company logo.

    

    

    

   Now, let’s learn from the experts, look at this guy:

    

    

    

   https://www.fiverr.com/donnesuccess/broadcast-your-ads-and-get-traffic

    

    

    

   He has highlights, bullet points, he doesn’t have bold everywhere but only where it matters.

    

    

    

   Good luck.