I changed my gig video

[Guest thili96]

hey, i changed my gig video twice.it’s good or bad? i will wait for your further information.
gig :

[gogugmg]

Focus on the products you offer, CLEAN ANIMATION
welcome intro OFF
FIRST, max 10 SEC -
-name - profile … is OK
-the next 30-40 sec - presents some projects
-your service
The final scene - CTA -this scene is important.
The price of the packages is not necessary for the video presentation.
turn off transitions
“Attention
Interest
Desire
Action”
It’s just an opinion, the choice is yours.