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Need Help ! Analyse My Gig Please!


alvial
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It looks great! Just one thingโ€ฆ

You said: Hi and Thank You So my for visiting my gig.

I think you should say: Hi and Thank You so much for visiting my gig ๐Ÿ˜‰

or you can just say: Hello! Welcome to my gig.

Hope that helped ๐Ÿ˜„

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