Any Critical Feedback Please

[princesuhaib]

Hey everyone, I am new here and I posted a gig on here and I want to know if I am missing something or what can I do to make this more attractive, or appealing to the buyers. Any Feedback from experienced sellers would be truly appreciated!

http://fiverr.com/princesuhaib/stumble-your-web-page



And here is one I posted today



http://fiverr.com/princesuhaib/leave-5-reviews-5-likes-i-have-25k-likes



Thank You

[musiclover]

Besides both of your gigs being similar, looks good to me. If I was you, I would create a video that explains what you do (like you already did), and add a quick screencast of your stumble page (blur out any sensitive information though), and I think it’ll be spot on. I like to see proof before ordering. I did collect your gig because I may order in the future. 🙂

[princesuhaib]

Hey thank you for your feedback! I have image of my stumble page on their and is blurred out sensitive names, as i said the proof is on the image I uploaded showing my account!

But how can i get more exposure via fiverr, and not externally? Any suggestions are much appreciated!



Thank you