Can someone review my gigs please?

[Guest shrutibatra]

Can someone please tell me if my gigs are OK or they need modifications?

[blaisefaint]

Dear Shrutibatra:

I took a quick look at your profile:

Run down the Improve My Gig Checklist ( 'http://forum.fiverr.com/t/improve-my-gig-checklist/84987` ). You’ve studied Fiverr Academy, listened to Fiverrcast or read the transcripts, studied the offerings on Fiverr in your niche, right?

If I started on this checklist for you…
Smiling in profile Image … YES, but the image is too close to you. Have a friend hold the camera. EDIT: The person in your profile image is smiling, but YOU are probably not the person in your profile image.
Professionally dressed in profile image … NO
Video in gigs … NO
YOU Appear in your video … NO
’https://forum.fiverr.com/t/ten-tips-to-optimize-your-gigs-create-trust-and-get-sales/165711`
Optimum use of Key Words … NO
Polished English grammar, punctuation, and spelling … NO
Professional-quality copy in your gig description …
3 images in Live Portfolio that are custom to this gig and not just pulled from the web … NO. You seem to understand that any Buyer who has been burned by a Seller on Fiverr will simply perform a Google Search on your “designs”…
Read the Fiverr Terms of Service … NO
Able to point the Buyer to Appropriate Resources to Minimize Miscommunication / Cancellations …
Able to Communicate Clearly with Buyers …

Good luck,
Blaise

“WHEN YOU USE ALL CAPS YOU ARE SHOUTING ON THE INTERNET WHICH MAKES ME THINK I AM IN THE WRONG PLACE EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE TELLING ME I AM AT THE RIGHT PLACE AND I THINK YOU WOULD BE WISE TO COME UP WITH ANOTHER TAG LINE FOR YOUR PROFILE!!!”

[Guest shrutibatra]

Dear Shrutibatra:

I took a quick look at your profile:

Run down the Improve My Gig Checklist ( ' ). You’ve studied Fiverr Academy, listened to Fiverrcast or read the transcripts, studied the offerings on Fiverr in your niche, right?

If I started on this checklist for you…

Smiling in profile Image … YES, but the image is too close to you. Have a friend hold the camera. EDIT: The person in your profile image is smiling, but YOU are probably not the person in your profile image.

Professionally dressed in profile image … NO

Video in gigs … NO

YOU Appear in your video … NO

’

Optimum use of Key Words … NO

Polished English grammar, punctuation, and spelling … NO

Professional-quality copy in your gig description …

3 images in Live Portfolio that are custom to this gig and not just pulled from the web … NO. You seem to understand that any Buyer who has been burned by a Seller on Fiverr will simply perform a Google Search on your “designs”…

Read the Fiverr Terms of Service … NO

Able to point the Buyer to Appropriate Resources to Minimize Miscommunication / Cancellations …

Able to Communicate Clearly with Buyers …

Good luck,

Blaise

“WHEN YOU USE ALL CAPS YOU ARE SHOUTING ON THE INTERNET WHICH MAKES ME THINK I AM IN THE WRONG PLACE EVEN THOUGH YOU ARE TELLING ME I AM AT THE RIGHT PLACE AND I THINK YOU WOULD BE WISE TO COME UP WITH ANOTHER TAG LINE FOR YOUR PROFILE!!!”

Thankyou so much.

I will surely make all the changes.