I just checked your gig and to be sincere somethings are out of place. The first thing you’ll want to tweak is your paragraphs. As a writer that was the first thing I noticed. Your description is muddled up with no space. Try using the Enter key to create short paragraphs. Like I’m doing here. If there are no paragraphs in your post, it becomes harder to read and buyers will basically ‘bounce’ off the page once they open it. Secondly, your opening is very basic. Try using your imagination, think of what your buyers are seeking and use it to convince them.