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Hello! New to Fiverr. Please critique my gig page!


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Hi everyone! Newbie here. I’ve just created a new gig. If someone would be so kind enough to give feedback on my gig page, I would really appreciate it!

It’s here: [link removed for being outside of My Fiverr Gigs]

Go here instead: New to Fiverr! I will be your copy editor and English tutor!

Will be helpful if you use paragraphs, bulleted list, perhaps some bold, italic, highlighted txt, etc.

If someone would be so kind enough to give feedback on my gig page, I would really appreciate it!

This line would read better as: “If you would be so kind as to offer some feedback on my gig, I would really appreciate it!”

Need to choose between “so kind” and “kind enough” they shouldn’t be combined.

Make sure to read up on this forum, you can learn a lot here.

Good luck!

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Will be helpful if you use paragraphs, bulleted list, perhaps some bold, italic, highlighted txt, etc.

If someone would be so kind enough to give feedback on my gig page, I would really appreciate it!

This line would read better as: “If you would be so kind as to offer some feedback on my gig, I would really appreciate it!”

Need to choose between “so kind” and “kind enough” they shouldn’t be combined.

Make sure to read up on this forum, you can learn a lot here.

Good luck!

Amazing advice, David! Thanks a lot!

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