[How do I improve?]

I am brand new to fiverr and recently put up two gigs advertising proofreading and cooperating services, my gigs are getting no traction at all and I was wondering how I could improve that. I've tried messing around with the description, tags, title etc. with no luck. How do u guys recommend I improve? I have also read that the buyer request section no longer exists and wondering if their was another way to easily get started?

My gigs:

https://www.fiverr.com/s/W8AoVX

https://www.fiverr.com/s/6RGXKX