Сheck my gig(every opinion will be very helpful)

[qqkana]

Please criticize and give advice to my Gig. I want to develop, but unfortunately I have no one to turn to for such information, I need the opinion of people who understand this. I will provide two links: one to my concert from a month ago and one to the concert I posted last week. I'd like to know if I'm moving in the right direction. I would be very grateful for any criticism and advice.

link 1-st gig :  https://www.fiverr.com/qqkana/create-custom-animation-youtube-logo-intro-and-motion-graphics

link 2 gig  :  https://www.fiverr.com/qqkana/elevate-your-brand-with-captivating-motion-design-solutions

Thanks in advance for your answers

Edited June 18 by qqkana

[qqkana]

and here I also made 1 gig, this time for new services, if possible, give me criticism

https://www.fiverr.com/qqkana/add-text-in-kinetic-stretch-and-liquid-style-for-your-project