Please review my profile

[shafqatalii]

As a new freelancer, I'm facing a problem getting orders I have just completed my first order with a 5 start rating. 

Kindly review my profile if there is any problem with gigs or something please let me know.

https://www.fiverr.com/shafqatalii?source=gig_cards&referrer_gig_slug=design-your-presentations-professionally-04e8&ref_ctx_id=1198e19d6b7f4ee323a9d3756e740b5e&imp_id=d78e56f1-2651-4899-8536-7a111ef55a95

[saimii]

I got some great Tips from a Seller here, and I can share those. 
- Your Profile image looks good, but if you can get one with a smiley face will show your friendly behavior.

- Description contains too many 'I'. It would be best if you focused on what the buyer will get.