I need suggestions to Improve my GIgs and to attract clients

[engineerumairs]

Hi All,
I have created my Gigs and Yet didn’t get much response, Could you please suggest what should I improve more to attract clients.

Following are the links of My GIGs.

https://www.fiverr.com/engineerumairs/create-your-programming-assingments

https://www.fiverr.com/engineerumairs/help-you-in-making-your-app-using-mvc-framework

https://www.fiverr.com/engineerumairs/help-you-in-asp-dotnet-mvc-and-desktop-applications

[blaisefaint]

Dear Umairs:

What name do you like to be called? Your customers want to know what to call you.

Dear Fiverr Seller: I didn't take a look at your gig, but here is a checklist that may help: Polish your English: spelling, grammar, punctuation, and so on. Are you trying to reach US English speakers or international English speakers? Make sure your phrasing is consistent with your target audience. Remember that buyers are on Fiverr so that you will solve THEIR problems. You are here to provide SOLUTIONS. There is no place for negativity in your copy. Don't say, I live in a third world …

Here’s a link to Fiverr Academy.

Here’s a link to Episode 1 of Fiverrcast.

If you take the time to earn your Autobiographer Badge, particularly adding a link to your Fiverr profile, other forum participants will be able to easily view your information.

As a general rule, when I have time to participate in the Fiverr Forum and I notice a request like yours in the “Improve My Gig” section, I am willing and able to look at a Seller’s Profile and one gig one time.

I can give you a better level of assistance if you first work your way through the checklist previously cited. That way, I won’t waste your one turn by advising you to follow items on the checklist.

For example:

Your profile image: You should smile. Having your hands folded in front of you is stand-offish. I suggest a closer photo, without your hands.
Your log line: Is too generic
Your profile text: needs to be proofread and demonstrates that you need to listen to the Fiverrcast episode "Working Through Language."
Your gigs should all have video and 3 images, and so on…

Good luck,
Blaise