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Guest mgtheboss
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While sending an offer to a buyer request posted in the “Recent Buyer Requests” section if a seller uses the following sentences near or at the end will it be unprofessional?
“We are looking forward to hearing from you.”
“We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.”
“Thank you for taking the time to read our proposal.”

Posted

It’s not. In fact, I use “Hope to hear back from you.” at the end of each of my sentences. It would be unprofessional maybe if you wrote “Please respond.”, but “We hope to hear from you.” isn’t unprofessional.

Guest emily_article
Posted

No. It isn’t. It’s very official and professional. It’s like when we write a cover letter applying for a job in a company. You have to add that to show your level of seriousness as regards that particular job you are applying for. As a matter of principle, I use it all the time to close my proposals.

Guest pabelahd
Posted

That’s even better.

Posted

It’s not unprofessional. I do that all the time.
Also I write phrases like “Looking forward to working with you”.
I believe they get exited about it and they feel more special! 🙂
Good luck!

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