leahemme Posted May 1, 2016 Share Posted May 1, 2016 I’m curious how others would feel about the following:How about replacing the ‘Here’s your custom offer.’ with a colon on the end instead of a period?So it would be, ‘Here’s your custom offer:’I feel like it’s more open ended, more friendly and inviting for the buyer to read on and consider your offer.I feel like the period is somewhat cold and non-inviting in this particular case.Anyone agree? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pr_topfivers Posted May 12, 2016 Share Posted May 12, 2016 yes, well noted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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