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Replace the period with a colon!


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I’m curious how others would feel about the following:

How about replacing the ‘Here’s your custom offer.’ with a colon on the end instead of a period?

So it would be, ‘Here’s your custom offer:’

I feel like it’s more open ended, more friendly and inviting for the buyer to read on and consider your offer.

I feel like the period is somewhat cold and non-inviting in this particular case.

Anyone agree?

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