Help me in making my gig best

[lambiloon]

Hello fiverr Friends please check my gig and help me in making at perfect.

https://uk.fiverr.com/lambiloon/create-2-company-logo-designs

[jamesbulls]

You need to improve the quality of the written English on your gig.

Logo: (I will) design 2 outstanding LOGOS in 24 hours

Seller profile description: I am a professional artist with a Bachelor’s degree in Film and Graphics. I can give fast and professional results with my creative ideas and skills. (You don’t need to say in the seller profile description that it’s exclusively on Fiverr - that only needs to be on your preview video.)

Basic Logo: Logo Design with JPG
"Vip Package" should be “VIP Package”

Logo design with source files and copyrights

Description

I am an experienced graphic designer with great skills as a logo designer. I can take your company’s appearance to the next level!

I will design 2 outstanding logos in 24 hours

What you get for $5:

2 outstanding designs for the price of 1!
Professional, high-quality work
Unique designs you won’t find anywhere else
Unlimited Revisions
JPG file up to 2000x2000
Fast, Friendly Communication
(** You don’t need to say that you’re working with the latest version of Photoshop. Your customers don’t care about this and it doesn’t mean anything to them.)
If you’re not satisfied with your logos, I’ll refund your order
(*** You don’t need to say <<Exclusively at Fiverr>> in your gig description. Just take it out.)

You don’t need the last paragraph of your gig description.

That’s what I see. Good luck!

[lambiloon]

Thanks sir