g4sythe Posted November 20, 2015 Share Posted November 20, 2015 Hi Fiverrs! It’s well known that having incorrect spelling and grammar makes you look less professional and trustworthy. I want to help! So if you post a link to your gig here I’ll fix the FIRST mistake I see and tell you whether the rest is good, needs improving or terrible.Why am I doing this? I want to test whether it’s worth trying to market my proofreading services for gigs to fiverr users. I don’t know if they (you) are interested in improving grammar in gig descriptions but I want to find out.I believe it’s very important, for example it was reported on the BBC that one large company doubled their sales after fixing a typo on their front page. So if you’re interested, let’s go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
debradesigns Posted November 20, 2015 Share Posted November 20, 2015 I would love to take out on your offer,please check out my gigs & let me know what should I do to increase visibility on fiverr & get more sells-https://www.fiverr.com/debradesigns/design-two-professional-kindle-or-ebook-coverhttps://www.fiverr.com/debradesigns/design-two-beautiful-web-banner-header-cover-adshttps://www.fiverr.com/debradesigns/design-stunning-product-label-or-3d-product-packaginghttps://www.fiverr.com/debradesigns/create-viral-teespring-tshirt-or-tshirt-for-your-businessThanks in advance for your help. 🙂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
g4sythe Posted November 20, 2015 Author Share Posted November 20, 2015 OK, I just looked at the first gig you listed.In the title: "I will design Two ebook cover or kindle cover with FREE psd"You are offering two of them, so “cover” should be plural, secondly the word Two is capitalized for no reason. So your title should be:“I will design two ebook covers or kindle covers with FREE psd”The same problem continues through the rest of your description, although you’ll have to find and fix those issues yourself. 😉 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrhambanana Posted November 20, 2015 Share Posted November 20, 2015 Hey i have been having trouble getting my first sale, any constructive criticism?https://es.fiverr.com/mrhambanana/do-pixel-art-with-your-ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
g4sythe Posted November 20, 2015 Author Share Posted November 20, 2015 Check out the top post in the “Tips for sellers” forum. Lots of good ideas.Specifically with your grammar: I don’t know much about Spanish, but in the English version your “i will” and “i can” need to be capitalised, “I will” for eg. Apart from that the rest of the text was good, just need to pay more attention to comma use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
g4sythe Posted November 20, 2015 Author Share Posted November 20, 2015 I replied in the general thread by accident. See below! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yashkumar Posted November 22, 2015 Share Posted November 22, 2015 Check my Titlehttps://www.fiverr.com/yashkumar/promote-your-website-to-20000000-google-plus-communities-members Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
g4sythe Posted November 22, 2015 Author Share Posted November 22, 2015 That’s a tough one to reword. I suggest:"I will virally promote you to 60,000,000 Google Plus members"Or if you want to keep a similar wording as you have now:“I will do a viral promotion to 60,000,000 Google Plus members” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superseoagency Posted November 24, 2015 Share Posted November 24, 2015 Can You help me? I am new here 🙂https://www.fiverr.com/superseoagency/do-professional-keyword-research-and-competitor-researchThank you 🙂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
g4sythe Posted November 25, 2015 Author Share Posted November 25, 2015 Only a few minor mistakes, apart from:“With this In-depth research you will get the Best Keywords with detailed report and the easiest to rank search terms which has Low Competition.”Should be:“With this in-depth research you will get the Best Keywords. It includes a detailed report and the easiest to rank Low Competition search terms.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tdelang Posted November 25, 2015 Share Posted November 25, 2015 As a non-native speaker I’d love to get some feedback from you!https://uk.fiverr.com/tdelang/solve-any-wordpress-problem?funnel=9a768479-7000-4502-9fb3-a4fd9218f316 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rns524new Posted November 25, 2015 Share Posted November 25, 2015 Please check my gig…https://www.fiverr.com/rns524new/design-a-logo-design-1455e310-cbb4-4ecb-abec-09050791ed25 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yassineer Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 Hey g4sythe,I need your help too, check my gig and tell me your suggestions pleasehttps://www.fiverr.com/yassineer/do-some-nice-logo?funnel=de0994d8-1c17-4706-ba4f-00420e64d73a Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perzend Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 Hey!Thank you so much for offering your feedback - this is really useful especially for newbies like me. Please find my gig below. Would love your suggestions on how I can make it better so that it starts showing up in search results!https://www.fiverr.com/perzend/proofread-and-edit-1000-words?arrived_from_manage_gigs=true&display_share=true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
okane01 Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 Hello,please take a look anyone at my gig:https://www.fiverr.com/okane01/code-fresh-email-template?extras=16543364https://www.fiverr.com/okane01/design-elegant-mailchimp-template?funnel=840ca1cd-cb1f-46ef-a82f-1d2a84b9a54bThanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
designerzidea Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 Please help me to improve my gig.Thanks in advancehttps://www.fiverr.com/designerzidea/design-you-desire-at-professional-level Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
designerzidea Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 https://www.fiverr.com/designerzidea/design-a-2-awesome-logo-for-you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
designerzidea Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 https://www.fiverr.com/designerzidea/create-a-awesome-logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
designerzidea Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 Please help me for improve my gigs.I give full time ,But no order,I think just wasting my time here… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
badansingh Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 Hi,Check out my Gigshttps://www.fiverr.com/badansingh/do-110-pr-7-to-2-back-links-from-blog-commenthttps://www.fiverr.com/badansingh/90-manual-dofollow-blog-comment-actual-page-rank-3-up-to-7Regards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ann_model Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 Hi,Could you check my gigs 🙂https://www.fiverr.com/ann_model/put-your-photo-or-logo-on-billboard-or-other-interesting-place?funnel=31e58669-d42a-4545-99e3-db1826f8664bhttps://www.fiverr.com/ann_model/hold-your-christmas-sign-in-santa-hat?funnel=31e58669-d42a-4545-99e3-db1826f8664bhttps://www.fiverr.com/ann_model/write-your-christmas-message-on-my-belly-chest-or-hand-in-santa-hat?funnel=31e58669-d42a-4545-99e3-db1826f8664bthank you and kind regards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wadheanand Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 HiPlease suggest ideas to get some good exposure to my gig services, its really down from past few months.https://www.fiverr.com/wadheanand/design-logo-professional-and-uniqueThanks in advanceWadheanand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevendesigns Posted November 29, 2015 Share Posted November 29, 2015 I would love to have you help my gig im not very good at making the description very good could you check over this one? https://www.fiverr.com/stevendesigns/make-a-amazing-twitch-andyoutube-overlay-for-you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevendesigns Posted December 1, 2015 Share Posted December 1, 2015 https://www.fiverr.com/stevendesigns/design-a-custom-twitch-overlayChanged the link of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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