Where do I lag?

[srahulprasad]

Hello !
Would like to have your views on this gig of mine. Do leave your thoughts and lemme know how can I make it better
https://www.fiverr.com/srahulprasad/write-one-effective-article-for-your-site-up-to-500-words?funnel=c0e391da-7874-4001-b5ca-4e6fd7201726

[createcrate]

The main image doesn’t seem professional - I’d remove the cartoon pic, and put up an example of what your previous work on a site looks like.

Some grammatical errors, improper sentence structure in the ‘About this gig’ section would make me not hire you for writing services.

‘I believe in Quality and Time’ isn’t specific, slightly confusing, oddly capitalized.

Overall, I’d want to see at least 2 examples on the ad before considering buying from you.
Hope that helps, I’m not meaning to sound so critical, but it’s honest thoughts.

[srahulprasad]

Thanks @createcrate. I really appreciate your thoughts.