Feedback Please

[adammoses]

I would love if you guys could check out my gigs and give me some feedback on how to strengthen my sales. Thanks

[fastcopywriter]

 

1. Hire an artist that knows Photoshop to fix the levels in your food pictures. Your pizza should look like this.

http://www.foodportfolio.com/b/wp-content/uploads/2010/12/Buffalo_Chx_Whole-lo2.jpg

 

2. Separate your paragraphs, no more than 5 lines for each, it will improve readability.

 

3. I would change this gig title: "I will write you a mouth watering food menu for $5"

To "I will write a savory food menu in X days for $5"

Or "I will create a delicious restaurant menu in X days for $5"

 

Fiverr doesn't allow hyphens (-) in gig titles so words like mouth-watering don't look good without a hyphen. It's also important to say the must using the least words.

 

By the way, do chefs write menus or create menus? Try searching both terms to see what appears. I think menu implies food.

 

4. Let's look at this gig: "I will write you recipes for $5"

 

Maybe mothers are searching for "gourmet food", so why not "I will create gourmet recipes for your dinner party for $5"

 

You can also do other gigs

"I will create a Thanksgiving menu for your family"

"I will give you my 10 most popular recipes" (once you're very popular, you can change the 10 to a 5)

"I will create a dinner menu for Valentines Day" (Fiverr doesn't allow apostrophes on gig titles)

 

A few more tips. Right now nobody's using the term: restaurateur. So if you can think of a gig that uses that term, you might make some money!

 

Example: "I will teach you how to be a restaurateur" or something better than that. And you could deliver a PDF full of wisdom about opening a restaurant, the restaurant business, or you can turn it into a consultation gig. Maybe try a gig with "restaurant business" in the title. Perhaps advice for future chefs-de-cuisine.

 

"Cuisine" is another term few people are using. I did a search and only found 9 recommended gigs, 2 with high rating. Huge opportunity for you. I didn't see anyone offering Cuban Cuisine, so you could do "I will give you 5 CUBAN cuisine recipes." Or you can do another category.

 

Best of luck to you!

FastCopywriter

 

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[adammoses]

Thank you so much for the great feedback, I will certainly implement a few ideas.

[Guest prinzidesign]

here i am, i can enhance and create great gig pictures for you! no doubt! whether you will have great gig pictures your sales are going to increase.

[catwriter]

Also, don’t use the same picture for two gigs. It doesn’t look good, and sooner or later Fiverr will request that you change one of the pictures (and then your gig will be suspended until a staff member can confirm that you have really changed the picture).

[danielrika]

No offense, but they are the worst images I’ve ever seen !

When taking the pictures try to get a brighter natural light, and use photoshop !