Can you check my gig

[maababa0022]

I am a new seller. Any experts pls check my gig, and let me know its perfect or not…

[loisjong]

Hiya!

I have checked out your gigs and I would like to advise a few things:

Firstly, your general description about yourself is in capitals. This makes it look like you are “screaming” this text.

Secondly, you 2 of your gigs have the same illustration, which is not allowed by Fiverr.

Thirdly, I would advise you to use capital at the beginning of sentences and use punctuations. And use a translating tool or have someone look at your texts because the english spelling is not correct. I understand that english is not your native language, but spelling mistakes make your gigs look unprofessional, especially because you are offering writing gigs.



I am sorry that I have so many points; I hope you understand that I am trying to help you with this.



I wish you lots of wonderful sales on Fiverr.



kindest regards,

Louise

[maababa0022]

thank you mam…i will followup this problem…

[shekevara]

This may help:



http://forum.fiverr.com/discussion/48649/win-free-5-0-dollars-and-5-votes-on-your-gigs

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[mr5roses]

If you are worried about your spelling and grammar, see my listing at https://www.fiverr.com/mr5roses/perfect-the-grammar-and-spelling-of-your-gig-listing?funnel=201502011845372208288660

[saekyung]

English is not an easy language. A few months ago, my grammar was not good, then I used nonplus. I improved my knowledge through this tool.