Please someone review my gig?

[sium5star]

Why gig impression is not increasing and I don't get any orders? what problem in my gig? Which thing will I fix in my gig? Someone, please suggest me.

https://www.fiverr.com/s/o8emxmN

Edited November 10 by sium5star

[filipdevaere]

This is the main reason:

 

[uk1000]

Here's a few things about your gigs/profile:

Gig: I will manage your social media marketing to grow your business

The basic package description says "5 days of daily engaging posts, complete with captions and optimized researched hashtags, including".
Ending on the word "including" makes it seem like something is missing. Including what?

The 3rd gig image says "Client satisfaction is our my goal". "our my" sounds wrong.

Gig: I will do instagram organic growth engagement boost your followers

The gig title could be improved I think.
In the FAQ section:
Maybe change "If I don't satisfied" in question 4.
Maybe change "if you don't satisfy then it will total refund of the cost." in answer 4.

In the profile:
In the line of text under the user name: "You are in Great place" could probably be improved grammatically.

Edited November 11 by uk1000

[sium5star]

Thank you so much, brother.