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I'm not a best seller but here's  a few comments/suggestions:

Gig: I will do ebook ,paperback formatting for kdp ,kindle

You're doing book formatting, but the formatting of the commas in the title aren't standard. Normally spaces come after commas not before them.

In the gig description:
Maybe change "i offer" (capitalization)
Maybe change "eye Cathy books cover"
Maybe change "your capitative book reader" (capitative="(of a tax or payment) relating to or involving a fixed amount per head" (collins)) etc.

You say:

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Ready to publish your eBook on amazon kdp, kindle.

look no further

Is the first sentence a question? It sounds like it could be but there's no question mark. The "look no further" is a new sentence but there's no capital letler L.

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Although I'm not best seller but first of make sure your gig images attract people to click. 

Use images in your gig that goes with your service. Like if you're selling books try adding book covers and detail like how you do it and how you offer your service.

Make it easier for buyer to understand. As simple as it is!

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I wouldn't blame you for using AI to write your gig's description but it looks like as if it's AI generated. 

The 'asking initial question' and 'look no further' things seem loaded, unwanted, and outdated. 

If I were to purchase your service, I would've liked to see your genuine engagement, in your own words with me (a potential buyer). 

AI is a great thing but it still lacks customization and human voice. 

I am a fully new seller here and I daily play tricks with my gigs to polish things up especially when it comes to the description part. If your words/design/art/whatever you offer don't directly talk about the customers' issues, you won't win orders. 

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