Improve My Gig

[sadiajamal745]

Hi, I am Sadia from Pakistan. I have been freelancing for the past 5 years. I recently joined Fiverr in May 2024, and I received my first order in June. Updating your gig titles, descriptions, and tags is a great way to get more clicks, impressions, and orders. Check the prices of other freelancers in your category and set competitive rates. Thank you.

[sadiajamal745]

Hi there,
I have updated my Gig description based on your guidance. If you have a moment, I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look and provide feedback. Your insights will be invaluable in helping me make further improvements.

[imagination7413]

Personally, my thoughts is that the above post is that this reads like an instruction manual, not a service description. Okay to have in the description (if there's character count available), but not good as the main sell-point.  

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Hey, @smashradio, I split this post from your how-to-craft-a-killer-gig-description-that-converts topic, since it's a request to personalized assistance, and am tagging you, just in case you'd like to offer your two cents.