Can everybody please view my fiverr gig and tell me if they have found any mistakes. how can i improve? (Link is given below)

[Guest mahid_bluecose]

Here is the link to my gig: 

I am a new seller although i had an interest in freelance for 2 years. I have tried previously but not as focused as I am nowadays.  can anybody please help me improve this gig? Please view my gig and tell me the mistakes you found😊👍