feedback Product design Gig, how can I be more clear and interesting

[phelipe_beserra]

This is my gig link, I'm new at Fivver, and all my experience was at startups and big corps, I tried to share it on my Gig but to be honest all the web design, and UX UI gigs I found here are super different from what I did, can you help me to understand if I'm on the right way?

https://www.fiverr.com/s/GvwEdZ

Edited October 27, 2023 by phelipe_beserra