Help me!! Im new Please Find my Mistakes

[alirezahs]

I'm Not claiming Clicks and Orders 
What should i do?
https://www.fiverr.com/pitchdeck_ppt/design-animation-powerpoint-pitch-deck-presentation-design-google-slides-ppt?context_referrer=user_page&ref_ctx_id=61efdd940ef0551c8f5d069b1f8a6f3f&pckg_id=1&pos=1&seller_online=true&imp_id=008ab7b0-0cd2-4c18-abc8-113354e16e73
I would be happy for any kinds of your helps.

[alirezahs]

I just updated my gig kindly help to find mistakes and optimise it more!

[alirezahs]

https://www.fiverr.com/pitchdeck_ppt/design-animation-powerpoint-pitch-deck-presentation-design-google-slides-ppt?context_referrer=user_page&ref_ctx_id=b8a8d0b2283c9aa0a084090e6bb7b1fe&pckg_id=1&pos=1&imp_id=85cb333f-d6a8-426b-a166-6f41a558998a

Here is my gig I am not getting orders kindly help me to optimise it and find mistakes or provide tips so that i start getting orders

[rakibofficial24]

Your gig looks good, best of luck.

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