please help me !!

[abdullah5217420]

Hi all members, I optimized my gig so can you see my gig and tell foe my mistakes or corrections? 

Gig link:
https://www.fiverr.com/abdullah5217420/do-professional-video-editing-for-youtube-in-24-hours

[abdullah5217420]

Hi all members, I optimized my gig but NO INTERACTION NO CLICK NO ORDER can you help me I'll pass my gig link plz check it. THANKS

Gig link:
https://www.fiverr.com/abdullah5217420/do-professional-video-editing-for-youtube-in-24-hours
 

 

[vibronx]

Reasons you're not doing well:

- You have duplicate gigs.

- You have already gained a few negative reviews.

- You say your services include scriptwriting, but your writing seems to be very... lacking, to say the least.

- You offer a money-back guarantee and unlimited revisions on some of your gigs. Try to think about why that might be a bad idea.

- Your gig descriptions are not persuasive. There's literally no reason to hire you apart from you being cheap. You don't mention why we should choose you instead of the thousands of other video editors. What makes you stand out? What are your skills?

Edited October 9, 2023 by vibronx