May I ask your opinion about my Fiverr video?

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Hi there!



I’m so thrilled I am now part of the big Fiverr family!



I completed my profile, created my gigs and I followed Fiverr advice by adding a video.



The thing is I shot my three-minute video and then noticed that it couldn’t be longer than one minute, so I had to edit the whole thing, speed things up and add lame voice-off commentaries to try to make things a bit clearer.

I’m not really happy about the results now.



I’d like the opinions of the ol’ wise fiverrs-addicts, will my video do the job and help me get more work?



Thanks!