Looking for Opinions from fellow freelance writers

[fluffyraptorboi]

I'm not exactly worried about buyers not coming in at the moment because it's to be expected as someone starting out in freelancing but I feel like there could be some improvements to my gig.

https://www.fiverr.com/s/E50WD8

Any suggestions?

Edited May 30, 2023 by fluffyraptorboi
Wanted to elaborate my title

[katakatica]

Heyhey!

2 hours ago, fluffyraptorboi said:

I'm not exactly worried about buyers not coming in at the moment because it's to be expected as someone starting out in freelancing but I feel like there could be some improvements to my gig.

 

VN writer (for a while) here, with perhaps one of the 'best-ish' seller VN gigs (not sure about that one; I just like to brag 😛 so don't take it too seriously. 

I think you're on the right path, but your gig does end a bit too abruptly for me. I think adding a list of your fave genres or something could round it out a bit! 
Something I'd sort of warn you about (though I know that the furry fandom/world is a tad different and the price of everything is quite high) you might be charging a bit too much for a first gig. I'm not exactly sure (it depends a bit on how long your pages get as well), but starting a bit lower with the possibility of writing more might be a bit better in the beginning. 

Potentially, I'd also make sure to mention that you write non-furry VNs as well (if you do so at least) just so people know to widen your target audience a little! A catchier gig image could help as well (mine is under construction so it's not a good example at this point either, but yeah!)

[fluffyraptorboi]

Thank you so much! I'll be sure to implement those changes asap!

[fluffyraptorboi]

9 hours ago, katakatica said:

Heyhey!

VN writer (for a while) here, with perhaps one of the 'best-ish' seller VN gigs (not sure about that one; I just like to brag 😛 so don't take it too seriously. 

I think you're on the right path, but your gig does end a bit too abruptly for me. I think adding a list of your fave genres or something could round it out a bit! 
Something I'd sort of warn you about (though I know that the furry fandom/world is a tad different and the price of everything is quite high) you might be charging a bit too much for a first gig. I'm not exactly sure (it depends a bit on how long your pages get as well), but starting a bit lower with the possibility of writing more might be a bit better in the beginning. 

Potentially, I'd also make sure to mention that you write non-furry VNs as well (if you do so at least) just so people know to widen your target audience a little! A catchier gig image could help as well (mine is under construction so it's not a good example at this point either, but yeah!)

Thanks!